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Friday, October 14, 2011

Query Help Anyone?

So here's the latest query for "My Best Friend is a Superhero." I would LOVE to hear all your comments so I can make it simply amazing and get an agent overnight. (Is that too optimistic...?)

Dear NAME,
I would like to submit to you my 52,000 word YA novel MY BEST FRIEND IS A SUPERHERO.
If seventeen-year-old Bek Black is right about Adam Axley being a superhero, falling in love with the notorious player means putting more than her heart on the line.

When Bek transfers to prestigious (read: snobby) Lincoln Academy, she figures the hardest part will be the curriculum. And maybe making new friends. She doesn’t expect to get drugged at Homecoming or face frequent robot attacks. Of course not every day is fraught with danger. Some days Bek accidentally falls in love with Adam—the guy that’s just always been around—and then somehow ends up dating his brother, Eli. The only explanation for Adam’s regular disappearances (and totally ridiculous excuses) seems to be that he’s Pride City’s famous crime fighter, The Fox. When a robot destroys Lincoln Academy and the students have to attend school across town at rival Whitson High School, Bek has to figure out exactly what her feelings for Adam mean. Especially since he seems to like her former best friend Amber. So okay. She’s so over Adam anyway. She’s dating his brother.
But if Adam really is The Fox, Bek has to choose: her heart or his secret.
I am the wife of a real life superhero (shhh!) and mother of two future super villains. If you’d like to consider MY BEST FRIEND IS A SUPERHERO, I’d be happy to forward the manuscript to you. Thank you for your time and consideration.

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I've been writing since I was old enough to grasp a crayon--my grandma even has an early copy of a "book" I made her. I have a bachelor's degree in history from the University of Wyoming and will (hopefully) soon be starting a graduate program in English. When I'm not breaking up impromptu UFC fights in the living room or losing miserably to my boys at Uno, I'm ... well, writing or editing, of course! I'm married to my best friend, and we have three rambunctious but simply amazing little boys.


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